titch
Jul 11, 2004, 04:10 AM
Circle Clicking
O Angels above, paradise to stand -
they saw me smile with a tearful gaze
Such sense and sentiment is beyond change -
figures come and go and from the ground suspires -
Motionless, I stand with my mouth to the sky
this mystery, not doomed to wear
O Nobler silence that saps the mind
enveloping winds - and my dreams escape-
Sun on leaves, as I too, circle around
captivated, yellow cheek of hers on mine
Disputed truth reveals, the dead without memory
and strength enough to bear eternal liberty
- I return'd again! Earth - continuing fantasy -
circle clicking, and still hopelessly flippant -
and I go wandering on, into venturous hope!
Titch
I am emplaced, everything induced
in the great journey and to arrive by comet
Of luminous appointed work in life
to which conscience gives its full ascent
©Titch K 2004
Silke Lance
Jul 11, 2004, 04:13 AM
| QUOTE (titch @ Jul 11, 01:10 PM) |
O Angels above, paradise to stand - they saw me smile with a tearful gaze Such sense and sentiment is beyond change - figures come and go and from the ground suspires - |
Wow! Lovely!
Thank you,so much,for sharing!
Keep posting!
Much Love,
Silke
+Steven Curtis Lance
Jul 11, 2004, 08:30 AM
Titch, my old friend!
I am so happy to see you here, and so happy to read such a beautiful poem. Thank you for writing and posting this; I look forward to reading many, many more.
I have missed you since our days together over at VoicesNet. Good to see you here.
Thank you so much for your kind greetings, and for your encouragement about my book.
Let's stay in touch!
TRANSEAMUS
misty_tears
Jul 11, 2004, 10:13 AM
This is awesome. I must say that it is quite the forward thought, very unusual.

misty
titch
Jul 11, 2004, 11:55 PM
blessings silke - I look forwardto being an active member - reading and sharing
love titch
titch
Jul 11, 2004, 11:55 PM
g'day steve - oh your verse are impacting - how could one ever forget? SMILE
thankyou for the warm welcome
love titch
titch
Jul 11, 2004, 11:56 PM
Thankyou misty - i am somewhat of an addict for transcendental prose - smile
selina
Jul 12, 2004, 12:02 AM
Such beautiful words.
I love the last line.
God, I love this site.
Blessed Be
Selina
titch
Jul 12, 2004, 05:35 PM
thankyou selina for the joy in sharing
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