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Nikacordato
Fate- Bye Nichola Cordato

I’m a prisoner to dark time;
Where misery in itself is a sinful crime;

A place where your prayers and answers are washed away;
And more pain then expected, more and more each day;

Silence and pity, strength and weakness;
Stranded, lost and left merciless;

Left to fend for your self, no escape;
Where character is lost and depression slowly shapes;

Legendary torture, only fables of imagination;
But being in the fable is an agonizing destination;

Extreme piercing of my memory, now starting to bleed;
Because this suicidal existence is now beginning to feed;

The burning sensation, stings from inside to out;
The sharp execution fills my hope with doubt;

Surviving is now impossible, for I am inflamed with hate;
Did I have to be a slave, to this severely dire fate?
Silke Lance
A very powerful poem....

Thanks for sharing~
Keep posting~

Silke Lance
+Steven Curtis Lance
Good strong poem, Nika, well-built of good strong couplets.

Your couplet structure and end-rhymes are perfect! I love this poem.

I wrote a sonnet in couplets today with long lines too.

Silke is right! A very powerful poem.

AD ASTRA PER ASPERA
misty_tears
Excellent Strong poem..

misty...
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