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Justme88
I long for you in so many ways
some you will never know
my fits of passion for you cannot be subsided

They come late at night
when the sky is as black as can be
and the moon lights the world

I grasp for you
knowing you aren't there
and my hand clasps over nothing

These withdrawls from you i cannot bear
I've never longed for anyone
the way i long for you

I just need on hand one finger to grasp
and to hold onto me
just some real part of you

Just to make the time go by
and to lull me to sleep
where i am content seeing you in my dreams
caitiff
this is absolutely beautiful.
salutes
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