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Justme88
You look at the stars
Shimmering in the sky above
like a shadow for your eyes

You look at the moon
Shining so bright
like a stick for your lips

You look at the never ending blackness
Traveling long beyond your sight
like a foundation for your skin

You see the fireflies
Flitting to and fro
like glitter for your body

You see the trees around
Circling your field of view
like clothes to complete your set

And you know the world around you is ready
for a night on the town
Silke Lance
Hey Kim!This is really GOOD! smile.gif
Thanks for sharing!

~Greetings
Silke
AmbientSnowflake
I enjoyed this poem. I would chop off the last two lines. It might give the reader a window to use their own imagination.

I imagined a field with a tree nearby, under a dark sky and crescent moon.
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