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Justme88
Kick, kick
Tap, boot
Hit you
you, out

Serve up
Kick,miss
Grab, toss
Miss, laugh

Up...again
Kick, rainbow
Kick, pass
Miss, stall

Drop, tap
Kick, hit
Pass, hit
HACK
+Steven Curtis Lance
Hey, this is a fun one! It sounds like you really were playing with your hacky sack. My son used to be really good at that; I haven't seen him play it lately, but he always used to play with his hacky sack at school... then, for some reason, they banned hacky sacks!

In any case, I like this one. It's a very novel concept, cleverly realized. It gave me a smile.

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