Apathy
I am the darkness in your heart,
The void in your head.
I am the englufing pain,
Which makes you feel dead.
I am your forgotten friend,
The sorrowful tears.
I am your despair,
The sum of all fears.
I am the suicidal thoughts,
Lurking to shine.
I am the false hopes,
That everything is fine.
I am your friend,
I am apathy,
I am your end.

Please comment all you want,
- Jay



(I edited this post to change the coding. For example, the italic codes were set as <i> </i>, I corrected them properly and left the rest of the post as is. AmbientSnowflake.)

Line breaks to set off stanzas in the poem might help. The last three lines can be set apart to remove the ackward of the flow there. You set up Apathy as an intity unto itself. I thought it was well writen. You use a lot of feelings in this poem, like fear, hope, despair, pain, and so on. Does apathy really have all those emotions? "The lack of concern or care for."

The poem is ment to be ironic

- Jay