caitiff
Jun 08, 2004, 07:22 AM
very good....so full of passion. i love angry poems. i think that you should go back over this poem, because i think it could be better and many times if you read back over it new ideas will come to you. over all i thought it was a very good piece though.
AmbientSnowflake
Jun 11, 2004, 04:51 PM
Good point caitiff.
| QUOTE |
Do you even know,
What you've done? |
Here is my question: What has he done? Why can't you trust him? Be specific. Did he steal your Pepsi? Did he break your heart, cheat on you, or tell your secrets to someone else?