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Rach
Lost in oblivian
Darkness ingulfs me
The nothingness creeps unto me
Void, blackness,non-existant,empty
It rolls through me like an ebbing tide
Like waves breaking on a shore
Flowing deep within me
Wanting to drown me
Wanting my very existance
Waiting for my soul
The cloak of darkness decends
washing through me devouring me
NOTHING REMIANS


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-J-
Hiya Rach,

Still in your dark "period", nice work
I like the imagery though disturbing,

Keep the quill moving !

J
Rach
Its easier to write the "darker" poems... well for me they are anyway blink.gif
Thanks J biggrin.gif
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