Its not supposed to ryme or anything. my first attempt. So any good critque would be nice

>Falling to Your Voice

Every time I hear you voice

I fall farther and farther down.

Every time I hear you voice

I go deeper and deeper.

Falling, falling.

Falling in love more and more.

Falling and never landing, never stopping.

The Love is always growing.

Never knowing when it will end,

Not sure where I will be when I land.

Never knowing If I will land.

Do i want to land,

If I hit the ground, is it over, or are we just beginning?

Beginning to see inside each other

Seeing who we are

the fall is just the greeting

Landing begins it all.

hey. it sounds like your poetry is meant to be read aloud....thats a good thing.
the poem has a good beat and flows together nicely.

Guess who? lol

Loved the poem. I really did. I guess you know why huh? lol

Loved it love you love anything to do with you XD

It's a good start.

Hey Lova Boi,

Thanks for posting your poem... its a good start, perhaps the use of stanzas would help?

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