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Dcents
this girl
she walks by
a faded smile

cringe
a fake hello
a faded smile

i love her body
she laughs
something, her eyes

never did anything
could have been perfect
something, its open

this girl
she changed me
it beats me
i didnt change her
it beats me
caitiff
hey. this poem is beautiful. it is so simle yet complex and the format is wonderful. you have an
incredible skill
salutes
AmbientSnowflake
It seems like she's an object. You should talk to her... maybe.
pashmina
tell me more...
seems there is so much of a story hereyou are not spilling us into.
you have my interest.

(i particularlly like the last stanza)
Dcents
ye i gues it doesant explain things well unless youve been in the situation before or something but i feel lke ill ruin it if i change it
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