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Silke Lance
Rest safe in my tenderness~*


Rest safe in my tenderness
Created from affection
Dearer than my life you are
Never fear for I shall hold you
We share the same existance
You breathe my blood and drink my soul
Our flesh is one flesh in one body
Our hearts beat in equal rhythm
Your pulse is as much mine
We will not be together for long
But we will never be a apart
You need me but I need you more
Please never leave me...




+Steven Curtis Lance
Little buddy, this is pure magic, every word...

Just like you.

I love and cherish this poem in my board, The Secret Place, and I am so happy to see it here on the good ol' main poetry posting board. Thanks for posting it here, and, above all, thanks so much, with all my heart, for writing it.

I love you, sweet woman.

*SKWN*

AMOR VINCIT OMNIA
Windowmaker
"You breathe my blood and drink my soul"

A very passionate line. You have captured all of the passion in this piece in one simple line. The rest simply dances around it, brilliantly but not quite as stunning as that one line. It just takes my breath away. This is my new favorite of yours. Thanks Silke. You continue in my prayers.

Kevin
Silke Lance
Thank you Steven(I Love you...so MUCH...)

And;thank you Kevin;for your kind reply.

~Greetings

Silke
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