+Steven Curtis Lance
May 12, 2004, 10:28 PM
Transcendental Sonnet #643:
Paradise for Two
Do you ever feel so close to me
That despite the distance through the miles
A shared intimacy comes to be
Known only to us but for our smiles?
The mystery of you and me transcending sea
Traversing land as hand in hand we understand
The power of absolute love brings
Into the realm of possibility
The relativity of all things
For those who truly love are truly free
Thus through this distance we discover
Wonders we might otherwise not see
As we are drawn so we recover
Paradise for two for you and me
*~ ( + ) ~*
+Steven Curtis Lance
Copyright MMIV Silke LLC
Ben
May 12, 2004, 10:55 PM
Great start! I can't wait to read the rest of this one!
+Steven Curtis Lance
May 13, 2004, 01:03 AM
Ben, I want to thank you for your encouragement, and also for your beautiful reply to a post of Silke's earlier; we both appreciate your sharing with us. I am so happy my sonnets mean something to you!
I have the happiest possible reason for not getting this sonnet finished yet: I have just been having a really fun conversation with the dedicatee herself, my muse and my mermaid, Silke. I'll finish it the best I can as soon as I can, and it will be growing here in this space above quite soon, I'm sure. I sincerely appreciate your interest in and support of my work.
We are in unbreakable solidarity together, always.
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Silke Lance
May 13, 2004, 03:26 AM
A paradise for two! (A Paradise for you and....me!)
A wonderful sonnet Steven,Lovely.
(I love you)
Silke
Diona
May 13, 2004, 06:55 AM
Steven
Brilliantly put..i enjoyed this and all of your recent sonnets they are encouraging
and strong. glad to see you feeling better.
love,
Diona
+Steven Curtis Lance
May 13, 2004, 08:38 PM
Thank you
Thank you
Thank you
to all who read my sonnets;
that my work means anything to you means everything to me.
I love you all.
"Solidarity forever, our union makes us strong."
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