misty_tears
May 10, 2004, 01:18 AM
thought I heard you call my name
whispering in the wind
and as I turned to walk away
I heard you call again.
A gentle breeze blew my way
I smelled you in the air
and though I reached out for you
I stood in solitaire.
The sun beat down upon me
with warmth from up above
I really miss you baby
and still give you all my love.
I looked around to find you
your face I did not see
yet, somehow I knew
you were there with me.
-J-
May 10, 2004, 02:58 AM
Dear Ms. Tears
I relate to this poem on so many levels and I hope you dont mind if I draw a very close comparison to one I posted last week called, I love you.
Poets of a common mind
I love this vision your poem brings.
John
misty_tears
May 11, 2004, 09:15 PM
Thanks -J- you are free to say what is in your mind. I also like the way you write... thanks for your comments..
misty
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