Summer love

When the days are great and the water is blue.
All you want to do is to go the beach and get a tan.
You want to feel the cold want on your feet.
You want to swing with the fish.
An, you want to find that summer love.

Well as you keep looking...
It looks like that your summer love has all ready found you.
It’s that guy from school.
You know the one that you like all year.
All you want to do is to get and tell him how you feel.
But you are to scare to move.
As you get up, you start to trip over your feet.
When you go to fall.
He is there holding you in his arms.
You start to feel the rush inside you.
Right then you knew that his is the one.
When all hope was lost.
You still found your summer love.


Hey girls,

plz tell me what you think about it. i know it is not the best on that i made so far.
but hey i think that it is still good.

Hey sadness,

Bit sexist aint you ?

From a man who is secure in his sexuality, I reckon its a good poem

Lets see what the "girls" think

J

I am happy that you think that it is a good poem.

Thank you for telling me what you think from a man point of view.

I agree with you.

Lets see what the girls think.

Anna

AWesome poem.. Is a bit sexist.. but hey tough luck to them huh! Great work! I felt it.. ure talented!!

GW BABE!

Nikita

kick a*s poem dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

thanks guys. i thought it was awesome.

Anna

I didn't notice anything sexist...But maybe I'm slow today! Either way, this is great stuff. Good job!

~Best~
Megan

cool poem.. cant wait for the summer season...


misty...