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Diona
My love is like the sun that warms me when i'm cold,
And like the cool water of the brook that refreshes me.
My love knows the secret pleasures of my soul,
And delights with me in fulfilling them.
Who is my love but the soul of my soul,
And the reason for every beat of my heart.
Who fills me with life in the joy of his presence,
And returns to me more than i have given.
Come to me, my love, i die without you.
Each day is eternity, waiting for your touch.
Remove the tears from my eyes and the ache in my heart,
Be closer than my breath, all my days, all my nights.
Silke Lance
QUOTE (Diona @ Apr 26, 07:03 PM)
Be closer than my breath, all my days, all my nights.

(I REALLY like that line!) smile.gif

A nice poem,Diona!

Much Love,
Silke
+Steven Curtis Lance
I agree with Silke, Diona; I really like that line too.

Very good poem.

AD ASTRA PER ASPERA
Diona
Thank you Silke and Steven!!
love, diona
Nikacordato
QUOTE (Diona @ Apr 26, 10:03 AM)
My love is like the sun that warms me when i'm cold,
And like the cool water of the brook that refreshes me.
My love knows the secret pleasures of my soul,
And delights with me in fulfilling them.
Who is my love but the soul of my soul,
And the reason for every beat of my heart.
Who fills me with life in the joy of his presence,
And returns to me more than i have given.
Come to me, my love, i die without you.
Each day is eternity, waiting for your touch.
Remove the tears from my eyes and the ache in my heart,
Be closer than my breath, all my days, all my nights.

QUOTE
Each day is eternity, waiting for your touch.


How touching!
Thats amazing doll keep it up babe!

Nikita
Diona
aw...Thanks Nikita..so much. love ,diona
rosediamond
It's a beautiful and heat wrenching thing to be in love, and I think you've captured both in this poem. Nice work! happy.gif

~Best~
Megan
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