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Abyss.... I like the other poems you have posted but this one just doesn't do it for me... I read it but it just doesn't have a feel to it... But that's just me...

Keep up the good job though!

As for people commenting, please bear in mind that people are busy, and to demad comments just make people not want to post any... I am just a new member and I have posted a number of poems here but not get many comments, it doesn't bother me as much because I know, I too don't have a lot of time to spend and comment on other's poems. It doesn't mean that I don't like it, but it's just that, time doesn't permit me so sometimes...

So please don't get offended when you dont get comments asap...