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Daisy Calica
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Have you ever heard laughter?
Sound so pure, so true and enchanting…
Shared between us two,
Forever, as I wish it to be…


Ooo, I like it. I'm a hopeless romantic, and this appeals to that side of my personality. I like the way you mingles emotions of love with the very touching human aspect of subtle uncertainty.... Perhaps that's not the right word....Or maybe it is Aargh...Too early.
~Very nice work!

~Best~
Megan
Daisy Calica
Thanks for you kind comments.. It is very much appreciated...
Justme88
for this it deserves comments...this was awsome! i love the way it flows soo easily. and it's very relateable.

Have you ever fallen in love?
And felt as if you couldn’t breathe…
Have you ever lost yourself?
And found it deep within…

favorite part...i read this through about 5 times...nice work
Daisy Calica
Kim, Thank you so much... It's very kind of you to say so and I'm glad that you like it...
+Steven Curtis Lance
Hey, me too!

I really like it too, and I want to welcome you among us and thank you with all my heart for joining us.

Please share more of your work with us; it's very nice.

Hmmm... how do you feel about sonnets? I have 570 of them hereabouts, if you'd like to have a look at what I do; bit of a sonneteer, I am.

Unbreakable solidarity, always!

Welcome!

AD ASTRA PER ASPERA
Daisy Calica
Hey Steven,

Thanks.. and I have seen your work... Marvellous...I love it...

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