I can’t help this pain; it’s driving me crazy all day long


It won’t go away it repeats in my head like a broken song


My days are black without a caring soul


Without someone to talk to, someone to hold


No one understands what’s killing me inside


No one can see what I’m trying to hide


I’ve loved you forever; it won’t go away


But love’s never returned, try hard as I may


I’ve cried and cursed this pain so much


But nothing helps without your touch


I’ve tried to tell people what’s going on


They never listen, they’re always wrong


They tell me it’ll wear away, just give it time


It’s been too long, this pain of mine


Just heal my heart, once and for all


No more wishing and hoping you’d call


One day you’ll see, just maybe you’ll see


What you actually meant to me



Bye - Nichola Cordato

Awww, I like this one very much. It would make a wonderful song. I love how you write your feelings so well, and how I can relate to most of your words.

Keep writing!
Love,
Dara

I like this poem. It really speaks to me. If it has to do with current events in your life then we're going though pretty much the same thing. Or have the same feelings about it at least.

Oh well written!

~Greetings

Silke

poeple ant always honest dats wat i learnt but it hurts in side i know it duz

yea! weel thank you guest!

----------LeTs GeT ReTaRdEd ( Black eyes Peas)