I Am Nothing

Thoughts that stray from
Wandering minds of
Blinded infancy,
Held together by the
Seams of reality.
So far away
Is the sun that shines
And lights my path
To empty hopes and
Lifeless dreams of
The distant happiness
Within my heart.
I am what stirs
In the minds of
Sinful creatures,
Feeding off sympathy,
Draining the blood
Of society through
My disillusioned
Self-perception.
I am not the past
I am not the future
I am nothing

you definetly have a start here, but there needs to be a bit of tightening. I am feeling some angst, but not really sure what it is directed against. try also breaking it into stanzas, will be easier to read for the reader.

cheers

"So far away
Is the sun that shines
And lights my path
To empty hopes and
Lifeless dreams of
The distant happiness
Within my heart."

I love it.... the feeling this part projects is so heartfelt... But the previous comment is right, you need to put these into stanzas...

Good work and thank you for sharing...