Clyde

I teach him how to sit
I teach him how to stay
I tell him over and over
Until he can obey

I try to make him listen
I try to make him learn
But some time he is bad you see
And then I must be stern

One time he ate my toys
I made me really mad
I wonder if in my doggies eyes
I am ever bad?


I was board so I wrote this. Will someone please critique it for me. Don't be afraid to be to harsh. I know its not that good.

Hello Terry, and welcome to our forum!

I am so happy you have come to join us. We are very much the richer and the better for your having come to be among us here.

I love your poem! I used to know a very nice collie named Clyde, so it brings back happy memories. I think it's a good poem, and I certainly want to encourage you in your writing.

Have a look at some of my sonnets if you have a spare moment sometime.

I am in unbreakable solidarity with you, my dear fellow poet, always.

AD ASTRA PER ASPERA
(To the stars through difficulty)

Nice poem Terry!

~Greetings

Silke

I must say this is an unusual topic for a poem! But it is enjoyable. Don't we all wonder what our dogs see us as? Keep posting!

~Best~
Megan