i'm not too big on sentiment
so think of all the time we spent
it's more than words could ever say
our love keeps growing every day

i'd never dream of hurtin' you
you know me, you know it's true
and maybe i just lost my head
if you were me what would you do?

the biggest mistake i've ever made
the highest price i've ever paid
you know i didn't mean too
think of all the time we've spent

i need you back, you need me too
despite the stupid sh*t i do
you know i do it all for you
i never meant to hurt you

"the biggest mistake i've ever made
the highest price i've ever paid
you know i didn't mean too
think of all the time we've spent"
I think this stanza could use some work.

"despite the stupid sh*t i do"
You should try to avoid cussing. It adds nothing of value to your writing.

"you know i do it all for you
i never meant to hurt you"
Try to come up with another word that rhymes with you.

lol. "you should avoid cussing." F**K that sh*t... the "you know i do it all for you" blah blah blah thing wasn't sposed to rhyme, but i suppose i should read a thesaurus or something... The first stanza does need work though... it's not really good but you know, i never claimed to be a poet... love love love... burn

Sorry if I insulted you. That wasn't my intention and I do think the overall poem is good.

No you didn't insult me at all. Sometimes my joking around doesn't come off like joking when it's typed... I should do somethin' about it but, well, i won't... love love love...burn