selina
Mar 15, 2004, 12:01 AM
Elements of Sorrow
Weep my willows
Cry my doves
Keen my eyes
Howl friend canine
Ashes from flesh
Fire to blood
Bone to kindle
Cackles from screams
My love is lost
Travel the River
Pay the ferryman
Lady like Stone
Offers 6 seeds
All is gone
The wind bites
Lecherously whistling
I feel the clouds leer
As the gentle breeze whispers:
"All is lost"
Silke Lance
Mar 15, 2004, 02:28 AM
| QUOTE (selina @ Mar 15, 09:01 AM) |
The wind bites
Lecherously whistling
I feel the clouds leer
As the gentle breeze whispers:
"All is lost" |
Hey Selina~
Thanks for posting this powerful poem here!
Love it!
*Hugs*
Silke
Try
Mar 15, 2004, 02:34 AM
I dont know the word, but its like for the first three stanzas every word is needed, its sharp and to the point and works so very well.
I really liked this, its got like a beat. Hmmm... very nice :)
mystic_tears
Mar 15, 2004, 03:53 AM
thank you for sharing............
selina
Mar 15, 2004, 11:52 AM
Thanks you guys for your kuddos!
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