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LocoJay
The sun is in my eyes so I can't see a thing,
its heat beats down wave by wave;
One burn after another with rays that sting,
the last shadow left, a grave;
In delirium I sipped sand as if a spring ,
more thirst was all that it gave;
How much more the wishful sound of water does ring,
sliding down the dunes I pave;
A slick path I can't climb, but at last He does bring,
a way through this, He does save;
I've come to shade in the desert under His wing,
His waters my quenching fave’;
Traversing the scorching trails, to Him I can sing;
by Jesus I can be brave.


QUOTE
Psalm 107:35
    But he also turns deserts into pools of water,
        the dry land into flowing springs.
Silke Lance
Hello Jay!

THIS is another good poem of yours!
Keep posting!

Silke
LocoJay
Thanks!!! Have a great weekend everyone! Godbless~

in Christ,
Jay



QUOTE
Ephesians 4:32 "And be kind to one another, tenderhearted, forgiving one another, even as God in Christ forgave you."
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