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rosediamond
Zenith of frigidity
Speechless and unmoving
Crystallized flesh of the timeless Fates cannot reach the threads
Figures for the lifeless passion
Drawing out the still surrender
Within the icy frame of unwelcome gain

Distant from the heartbeat
Unfeeling of the loss
Waiting in the endlessness, unknowing

Numb inside, in silence
Unwary of the dark
Comforted by nothing
Fighting for nothing

An echo and a shadow
A touch of winter wind
Rouse the souls, undreaming, to awakening
The messenger will beckon at the door of golden refuge
Waiting for the answer torn from lips of burdened solitude
Silke Lance
QUOTE (rosediamond @ Mar 08, 06:07 PM)
Distant from the heartbeat
Unfeeling of the loss
Waiting in the endlessness, unknowing

~Megan.
This is a very well written poem of yours.
I like it.
Good work.

Keep posting.

Silke
rosediamond
Thank you, Silke! Love hearing from you! Take care, okay?

~Best Wishes~
Megan
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