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Can I call you Angel?
Would that be okay?

Can I tell you, when we talk, I find peace and serenity in your sweet voice?
Can I say your beauty is unmatched?
Am I wrong to dream of women like you? Is it sinful to see them lying with me, clothed only in the pink petals of roses, resting their beautiful head on my heart as their silky blonde hair blankets my chest? Am I a sinner?
Would I be wrong to say that, gazing into your beautiful green eyes is to swim in an ocean of emerald water, warm and
soothing.
Can I believe you to be a gift from God? That, in a moment of pity, God opened the gates of heaven and allowed but one
of his Angels to descend. Sending with you mans sweet dreams of passion.


Can I call you Angel?
Would that be okay?





rosediamond
This is a very sweet piece, colorful with imagery, almost dream-like. Good work.

~Best Wishes~
Megan
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