rosediamond
Mar 05, 2004, 09:34 AM
There's something in the voice of man
That cries out for the upper hand.
Can you hear it?
There's something in the oceans' waves;
The tears of endless souls unsaved.
Can you taste it?
There's something in the desert winds
That whips at unprotected skin.
Can you feel it?
There's desperation in the sky
As tears of blood rain down from high.
Can you forget it?
There's triumph in the fire's blaze;
The innocents flee from the haze
Can you forgive it?
Can you forgive it?
Silke Lance
Mar 07, 2004, 02:34 AM
Powerful...
Nice poem!
Take care,
Silke
rosediamond
Mar 07, 2004, 10:45 AM
Thank you, Silke!

~Best~
Megan
Try
Mar 07, 2004, 12:40 PM
Oooo much love for this... nice structure, nice impact really attracts the reader. Nice piece ~ keep penning such like xxx
rosediamond
Mar 07, 2004, 02:05 PM
Much gratitude for your words, Try!

~Best Wishes~
Megan
ayanasphere14
Mar 23, 2004, 10:23 PM
I like it... very nice.
rosediamond
Mar 24, 2004, 10:43 AM
Thank you, ayanasphere14!

Reactions are much appreciated.
~Best~
Megan
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