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Ipresahnseles
hot sun on a balcony
water lay like glass
before us in silence

we tried to speak
in the real words
adults are known to use

all we could muster
shoulder to shoulder
hand to hand

were the sounds
of our minds crashing
together in the quiet

staring at the sun
glancing off the water
mirroring our souls
rosediamond
Lovely. Keep up the good work.

~Best Wishes~
Megan
Ipresahnseles
Thanks Megan...best to you
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