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Ipresahnseles
Juncture
hairline to forehead
peeled back tentatively
revealing
hornet's nest

Escape
darkness to clarity
ascending upward furiously
welcoming
bright sunlight

Inside
gray matter to vessels
stepping across synapse
blinding
brilliant darkness

Anarchy
platform to tracks
dodging amidst electricity
coursing
hot third rail

Passages
chaos to simple
unfiltered within void
touching
raw emotion

Secrets
tender to dark
blazing with truth
staring
unabashed passion

Pattern
heartbeat to lungs
perfection of rhythm
unceasing
true wonderment

Hornets
sky to nest
returned to sanctuary
satisfied
tasted freedom

Juncture
forehead to scalp
replaced with care
treasured
sacred journey


Silke Lance
QUOTE (Ipresahnseles @ Mar 03, 02:29 AM)


Escape
darkness to clarity
ascending upward furiously
welcoming
bright sunlight


Very nice! smile.gif
Ipresahnseles
thanks Silke...glad you liked it
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