MY last few weren't all to great...so last night i wrote this for someone who's close teo me but we've only known each other a little while...I hope you like it and i hope you make ANY comments on it good or bad


It's weird to think you've only been mine for a day or two
I already love who i am when i'm with you
There is so much about you i do not know
but i'm ready and willing to learn

So many times before you i swore off love forever
Yet i think about being without you and my heart begins to sever
I'm ready to give my soul to you
and i'd tell you all my secrets should you ever ask

Maybe it's something inside you or maybe in me
But what it's done only true love can see
i've never fellt or acted this way before
and i'm not quite sure what i'm supposed to do

It's already moving fast
but not as though it won't last
i don't know where this side of me is comming from
but i'm sure only you could bring it forth

This brand new pasison within me is something i've never known
and if i can't be with you, i'd rather be alone
I hope that when the world ends, i'll be safe and in your arms
so not only will i die with you, i will die happy

Okay this really isn't really my type of poem... ewww love... hehe... not something I *do* ... but just wanted to comment because I liked the flow of it, and it really does show some deep emotion, from that point of view I think it's a class poem :)

Well done x

I like it, Kim; I also like the title, and think you should keep it.

Solidarity forever, my fellow poet!

...I like it! KEEP the title!

Take care,
Silke