you only get one chance to F**K yourself up

live while you're young
or live easy as an adult
i know what i'm doing
and i know it's my fault

i've seen people take the path that i've chose
it's a much nicer walk down the road paved with gold
we could've been doctors or lawyers...who knows?
but we'll live recklessly, and we'll never get old

live in your youth or die in your sleep
you can F**K with your soul but it's not yours to keep
who knows what will happen when i black out and die
i know just what i'm doing, i just don't know why

if my heaven is here
i have nothing to fear
living like theres no hell
what the F**K, might as well...

i really think that is an awesome poem, im not much on the grammer stuf so i dont know if that was good, but i know the emtional effect was awesome

i would really actually prefer it if people didn't focus on the grammar and focused more on the emotional effect. I already have an english teacher, i don't need any more.