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burnout_00
it used to be you and me
but we still had our friends
now we're the jerks who cut them off
when we're around they play pretend

have you noticed they don't like us?
have you noticed they don't care?
do you know they talk behind our backs?
they run their mouths when we're not there

if no one wants to help us
then just stay the F**K away
we got ourselves into this mess
we'll save ourselves one day

i know i'm one to talk
but you're taking this too far
look at yourself in the mirror
this is what you really are

and now i've changed a little bit
and you still do the same old sh*t
my old friends talk behind your back
now i understand what they're saying

written by me, from someone else's point of view.
Try
"if no one wants to help us
then just stay the F**K away
we got ourselves into this mess
we'll save ourselves one day"

OMG That is so good... um... really raw and cuts to the point... I really liked this one... it's just filled with such angst emotion... hmmm... great write x
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