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rosediamond
Child . . .
You look lost and forlorn, child.
Head bowed, helpless and worn, child.
Could you be part of me?

Wise man . . .
Lend me hold of your wisdom.
Send me traveling over the mountains and sea
'Til I become weary.

Beautiful . . .
With your hair and skin without flaw,
And your eyes coyly twinkling:
Are you deep inside me?

Warrior . . .
Bearing arms and a thousand scars,
Struggling even when all is lost;
I can feel you in me.

Lost soul . . .
Without purpose and nowhere to go,
Weeping bitterly though no one knows,
I wll share in your pain.

Heart . . .
The strong beating of one heart
Can make everything worth it.
I am living again.
Silke Lance
QUOTE (rosediamond @ Mar 01, 06:23 PM)
Child . . .
You look lost and forlorn, child.
Head bowed, helpless and worn, child.
Could you be part of me?

Wow.....This is GOOD!!!
A pleasure to read!

Take care,
Silke
rosediamond
Muchos gracias, Silke! happy.gif

~Megan~
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