mystic_tears
Mar 01, 2004, 05:16 AM
Soft music fills the candle lit room,
Just the two of us, with all our love to share.
You kiss my lips and tenderly caress me.
Keep telling me how much you care.
Your hands are caressing by breasts.
The sensation I feel is so thrilling.
Everytime you make love to me
It gets more and more fulfilling.
Now I'm enjoying your warm wet kisses.
They are awakening my passionate senses.
When you whisper sweet love words in my ear,
The erotic feeling comes on, my body tenses.
Then I tell you how much you mean to me.
I kiss your nipples with my wet eager lips.
I gaze into your dark brown eyes
And caress your face with my finger tips.
Like a magnet your body is drawn to mine,
I moan with utter delight.
With the rhythmical motions of love
We conclude a heavenly night.
+Steven Curtis Lance
Mar 01, 2004, 05:21 AM
This is a strong and sturdy and evocative poem; I like this one. A poem consists of words of power; it is like an incantation. A good poem has the power to make the reader feel, and think; good poetry is catalytic, it changes the reader: a little bit now in particular, a little bit ever after in general.
Well written, well done.