This rain
Never ends for me.
This rain
Drenches me
With loss and regret.
There is no shelter for me.
No shelter
From the past.
No relief
From its pain.
The memories
Of a life once mine.
Pour over me.
Covering me
With the echoes of your final words....
"Good-bye."
This rain
Runs down my cheeks.
Loneliness
Forever etched
Upon my face.

so much sadness in your poetry lately, really feel the agony.

"Loneliness / Forever etched / Upon my face."

I like this, though maybe I shouldn't... no words... but *hugs*

Still glad you are back posting here x

I think the beauty of this poem lies in the fact that it's such a simple action of standing in the rain, but the raw emotion emits a strong aura of silent agony, something I am sure everyone has at some point felt in their lives. Nice.
~rosediamond~