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Asmodaeus shed his smoldering reign,
(Fiery hail---the sign of mourn)
For to him the touch of beauty
Arbitrated the elusional guise.

Aristotle bound to the metaphysical,
Systematic within coveted syllogisms,
Shed no empathetic discernment;
Acumen danced the halls of insight.

Achilles exalted in lament,
Renouncing to polemicized fraughts;
Retching upon receiving the Judas Kiss---
Astringently by the illuded hand of Izlude.

Alpheus ascending unto Ionia---
Candescent under the stars of Cancer---
Cantillating the mythical waves;
Analytical, logical, linguistic,---psyche!

Aselleus bared her blessing heart---
Loving mother to all above and below;
(Lapidary were her eyes---of lapis lazuli)
Asthenic she grew for her existence they never knew.
rosediamond
I love this poem. Being a lover of all things epic, legendary, mythology-related, or plain inconceivable, this amazed me with the imagery and numerous references. Wonderful.

~Megan~
Silke Lance
Oh,this is really GOOD! Wonderful! smile.gif smile.gif smile.gif
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