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burnout_00
This is a sublime song. I know it's song lyrics, but it's poetry to me.

lying in my plastic bed, thinkin how things weren't so cool to me
my baby likes to shoot pool, i like lying naked in my bedroom
tyin' on the dinosaur tonight, used to be so cool
now i got the needle, and i can't shake
but i can't breathe, i take it away but i want more and more
one day i'm gonna lose the war...
akhtar
are you talking of addiction? drugs maybe?
interesting read thou disturbing
burnout_00
addiction, drugs, same old same old....
Try
"One day I'm gonna lose the war..."

What a lovely comparison... it just works...

You are right, lyrics are poetry, well in my opinion, and it makes a change every now and then, don't you think?
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