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roachman1215
Alone
Lost within my sadness
Lost within my longing
For just a moment with you...
A touch...
A kiss...
Or just a spoken word....
To end this painful solitude.

Alone
The night smothers me
With nightmares
Of loss and anger and endless tears.
I cry for you....
Reach for you....
But you are gone.
Living your life
That I am never a part of.

Alone.
Wondering.....
Will you notice me again
Only when I am dead?
akhtar
i don't normally do these things but wow! this is so good, really caught me, the sadness of it, nearly bought a tear to the eye.
talk about coming back with a bang, good to see you posting again
Try
Oooo... you're back... hope you've been well... this write seems really tense... like when you get to the last "Alone" it cuts in...

Nice imagery in the second stanza of the night smothering you, I really enjoyed reading this...

*applauds* xxx
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