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Taken In

I watch you.

I watch you fall to the floor,
When you've done too much.
You couldn't keep it on the low, could you?
Had to keep taking, keep smoking,
Keep drinking, keep injecting...

Keep hurting, and pulling at me...
You destroyed all that I had.

And I thought it was love.

Maybe I just felt it was my duty?
That you held me so close,
You made me feel so damn wanted.
I was so perfect.
So F**KING perfect.

But she was always there,
And I never knew.

I never knew.

And when you took too much,
You came knocking at my door.
We sat and sang, danced in the night,
And I was always there for you.
To make sure you came down alright.

Vicious circle, take the drugs,
Take the fall... take me down with you.

I trusted you.

But look where it got me.

I watched you together, and it hurt,
But I waited for you to break once more.

And as always...

When you come around,
And we dance.

And we kiss.

I watch you.

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Taken In #2

You made my day,
Just being there.
I was so suprised,
So taken in.

I was yours,
And you used me.
It felt good,
Until now.

I can still taste you,
On my lips.
I can still feel your,
hands around me.

I still want you.

As we slowly danced,
To the murmur of rock metal.
We were lost,
In each others eyes.

I can still smell you,
Weed, you'd been smoking.
Homegrown, just like,
Your daddy taught you.

And I watched you.

I watched you leave with her.

I cried. You know that?
I went home and cried.
And thought about you,
And how we fit so perfectly.

So F**KING perfect.

We were always perfect together.

Too perfect for love,
So happy valentines J...

I'm thinking of you,
Thinking of you,
With her...

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I take it everyone of you hates these. Thanks.
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