gemma
Feb 08, 2004, 03:45 PM
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Try
Feb 09, 2004, 02:33 AM
Just one word... paragraphing... I shall attempt to read it now...
...though I promise nothing...
Try
Feb 09, 2004, 02:40 AM
OK... Yeah I kind of like this... keep writing it... still needs to go on for the second section to become clearer... but looks good so far... just keep the above in mind ;)
sbhenderson
Feb 09, 2004, 08:23 AM
My only disappointment was getting to the last line, and seeing that there were no more lines... ~Suzette
sbhenderson
Feb 09, 2004, 07:25 PM
The good stuff.... I'm addicted.... ~S.
carolyn
Feb 11, 2004, 09:11 PM
Gem, this is good...I only read the first bit because there's a fuckload there!! I will get back to it, though.
Nice job, keep writing it.
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