F**K this world
i just cannot take it anymore
its not worth it
nobody loves me
im tired of waiteing
everyone has someone
or atlest has had someone
i have nothing
and i dont want to waite anymore for them to come
im sorry
i just can't take this

she wrote this note over and over trying to make it perfect. she didnt want someone to be confussed or not understand why she was doing this. she wanted them all to feel her pain. she wrote her letter and placed it on the door to her apartment on the outside for everyone to see. she whent back in and look at a picture of her father. the man that left her. the onely man she had ever had. all she wanted was a father but he ran away. she was so tired of not haveing a life. no friends, family that hated her, and noone that understood her. she wanted so much to go back to forget about her pain but it came back everytime, bringing pain and hate with it. yes i know its hard to understand. but she knew. so she walked in to her living room looking around at her paintings. her storys on the wall. how her mother hated how she would write storys. made her cry to think of the screams of her mother yelling at her when she read what all the storys she wrote. "mom would allways be the one to tell me i was nothing." she said to herself. " if im nothing mom then i dont want to be just another freak on the street!" she picked up her gun and placed it to her head. and said "what is life?" she said this shakeing pulling the trigger not a second thought in her head. so she fell hiting the floor. tear in eye, smileing.

YaY Kaysie is back... and writing...

I like this... I kind of empathise with the idea, of only ever wanting a father... Nice idea to start with the note and... the explain. I like this alot.

"Mom would always be the one to tell me I am nothing..."

Keep writing... and to everyone else...

Stop 'Short Story' posts *disappearing*! It's just as worth as anything else...

Good work xxx

i wont be writing much more, i took a test on my writing skills and they said i was good just not good enough.
sorry for writing so much. it just made me happy you know?

If writing makes you happy...then why the hell would you stop? F**K them and what they say, what matters is you, how you feel and what you think. So if you like to write, write your heart out.

beacuse im not good i know that now.
i cant be happy writing things people dont even like.
just...can't

What was it that made you suddenly think that your writings aren't good?

if you can't be happy writing things that people don't like...do you mean that if one person doesn't like it, you can't be happy? or if the majority doesn't like it, you can't be happy?

write for yourself, not others.

i took a test a failed for my writing

a test? like at school, or on the internet or what? ah well, it doesn't matter.

even though my opinion makes no difference since i see you are focusing on the negative rather than the positve--your writing does not suck. Far from it, actually.

and I hope you don't quit writing as much all because of some test.

Kaysie.

Do not stop writing. If anything, let us help you improve.

The only things I see wrong is your grammar and spelling. That's easy to solve.

I like reading your writing... please don't stop... x