"KISSING YOU"

wHEN YOUR LIPS TOUCH MINE, I FEEL THE SEXUAL TENSION,
IN YOU, AS YOU SLOWLY CARESS MY JUICY PALATE,
I FEEL YOUR WETNESS, THE SWEET, SEXY DESIRE IN
YOUR LIPS AS THEY QUIVER, WHEN YOU TOUCH MY HIPS,
FEELING MY CURVES AS YOU MOAN, RUNNING YOUR FINGERS
THROUGH MY HAIR, LIKE A SMOOTH COMB, YOUR TONGUE
TANTALIZES MY LIPS AS YOU PLAY I PULL YOU CLOSER,
NEVER PUSHING YOU AWAY, YOUR STRONG MASCULINE CHEST,
RESTS ON MY VOLUPTUOUS BREASTS, WE BREATHE IN A MELODIC TUNE
AS LIGHT EMINATES OFF THE MOON, THE LIGHT GLISTENS ON OUR FACES
SHOWING A SEXY, SILHOUETTE OUR SHADOWS BECOME ONE,
AND STILL I CONTINUE TO KISS YOU, AND YOU KISS ME
YOU BREATHE HEAVIER THAN EVER BEFORE KNOWING IN YOUR MIND
THAT YOUR LIPS WANT MORE, MY HEART BEGINS TO RACE,
JUST THINKING WE ONLY GOT TO 1ST BASE!!!!
I DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT WHAT ELSE COULD HAPPEN,
BUT THIS KISS HAS MY BODY BLASTING!!!! I WANT TO
START AGAIN BUT IT'S GETTING LATE,
SO FAREWELL LOVE, THAT NEXT KISS I ANTICIPATE!!!!!!

POETICALLY, AQUAPOET

The words and projected thoughts in this are good, and a reminder
that attraction starts with a thought. For easier reading, perhaps try rephrasing the sentences, to flow with the rhyming that you have produced. The capitalization is a little distracting, and takes away from the impact of the words themselves.
Looking forward to reading more.
~Suzette

thankx! i thought perhaps the words themselves eminated a nice scene. i do agree that the capitalization is a little distracting.

The moon part made me think of this time I went to a park with my girl really late at night. We were just laying there, looking at the moon and the little red dot of mars and it was so nice... Then we both noticed that neither of us were wearing any underwear and no one seemed to be around. We were just about to start making time underneath the stars in public and then the sprinklers came on and scared the sh*t out of us...

*sighs*

ah memories...

hey that was real good that sounds just like me and my fiance we're just like that..its amazin how tantalizing and erotic a kiss can be to the body...especially wen its good-haha.but keep it up aight...