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LocoJay
I'm here contemplating what to do,
sit and laze around with days that are numbered few?
So much is the value and the gift of each new day,
blessings of breathing and seeing and living in the way.

A new adventure of life , not hardly a dull moment,
wonderful, mysterious, secure, following in Your steps,
time with you not wasted at all, to the max worth spent,
giving You more of me, that I will not regret.

When I look back at where I was, and forward to where I will be,
I am humbled by Your affectionate compassion, grateful for Your mercy.
Wish I would have seen sooner the wrong road, that which I was on,
but by His grace we take to Him each mistake, and in His forgivness our sins are gone.

Every time I lose more of myself, I am blessed with more of You,
Let each day be lived for You Jesus, abundant through and through
Andie
That was beautiful, though i can't say i agree. It really was wonderfully written, nice job...
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