It's all inside
you'll never know what it is
i don't even know what it is

sometimes i get a glimpse inside
and another piece of the puzzle comes through
maybe one day i can put it all together

i can't help but think
if i knew what i wanted
would things be different

i've always thought
if you knew what i wanted
would everything change

what if what i wanted was you
i think i just got another glimpse
another piece to fit in

i look into your eyes
and another section falls out
although you will never know

the puzzle is together
i know what i want
i want you to know

i'm holding back
but only from you
because you are what i want

A lot of mixed emotions eminating from this piece... The rhythm was a bit difficult to grasp..but that could just be me... I tend to follow some meters better then others..
I did like how you associated things with a puzzle and putting it together..only to have pieces fall out... very descriptive!

i didn't really care about meter on this one.....i've been feeling a strong emotion tonight....not sure what it is....and writing helps me sort things out....thats why i've posted so many tonight....i've never written this much before...so don't look for meter in this one....it's just meaningless words on a screen

I completely understand... I have a few of those very same sort of inspired writings myself floating around here somewhere..

I hope you feel better soon.

thanks i hope i do too