Charise
Jan 18, 2004, 12:28 AM
Hidden in the very back
a leather booth for two.
Engines turning, secret yearning,
motioning the cue.
Landscapes framed in window panes,
softly etched with frost.
the whistle blows and passion flows,
with caution all but lost.
Rising, soaring, deep exploring,
engines groan and sigh.
Methodic rhythms now begin
the landscape passes by.
Melted frost on steamy glass
the ripping of a gown.
Red lights flashing, leather smashing,
moisture trickles down.
ganji
Jan 19, 2004, 02:09 PM
this is brilliant! Wow!
Charise
Jan 19, 2004, 02:55 PM
Thank you...
burnout_00
Jan 20, 2004, 07:49 PM
this is fuckin great... i'm startin to like this section. Don't know if i'll contribute anymore, but i'm really liking it...
mystic_tears
Feb 18, 2004, 02:52 AM
awww. nice and short!
lyrimac
Feb 25, 2004, 01:25 PM
mmmmm mmm. what a ride, what a ride.
Mac =)
HayZeus
Feb 29, 2004, 10:11 PM
you leave so much to the imagination! Very good work.
tigressfee
Apr 08, 2004, 06:05 PM
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Diffrent but i like it.
Unknown
Jun 03, 2004, 10:27 AM
It makes you wonder,doesn't it
Unknown
Jul 07, 2004, 05:39 AM
Wow I love it and now I want it. Youre a great writer.
itsinhiseyes
Sep 28, 2004, 04:01 PM
Yes at last. A poem which flows. Well done. The best I've read so far. Any more?
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