burnout_00
Jan 16, 2004, 10:14 PM
a leap of faith
no more hate
it's horrible, but this is fate
you know that i'm still thinking about you
it's a different world without you
lately i've been feeling strange
now that you're gone it's time to change
i'm doing the things we said we'd do
i'm doing all of this for you
i threw my poison down the drain
instead of ruining my brain
i know that it sounds wrong
i'm better now that you are gone
lately i've been feeling strange
now that you're gone it's time to change
a leap of faith
no more hate
it's all fucked up, but this is fate
Charise
Jan 18, 2004, 01:47 AM
Maybe this was the one I commented on in the other thread..lol... I can't remember now!
If my memory serves me well... This is a real experience.. first let me just say I'm so very sorry for your loss... funny how it works though... you start out with denial..then anger.. then numbness... then acceptance... and one of the best ways to cope is expression through writing... You've done a fantastic job of putting your feelings into word.. not many can do this... the poem flowed wonderfully as well.
A very good piece!