ok so unfortunatly most of my writing...all that is good anyway, comes out of my anger...so i don't get to write well very often however certain circumstances today and yesterday i wrote this kinda angry but i wanna exactly what you think....i odn't know you personally i can't get offended and i won't hit me with everything!

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F**K this sh*t
Light me head on fire
It already feels like it is
I can't take it anymore
I just wanna jump
Off the tallest building
I wouldn't even feel any pain
The thought of you is running through my mind
I can't shake it no matter how I try
The only thing grounding me now
Is she could die instead of me
Things could be so different
But that's not the way you choose it
Good thoughts are gone now
One foot is off the ground…
One more and I'm gone
You're out
Now I'm gunna die instead of her
The only thoughts grounding me are gone
both feet are off the floor....
vengence is mine
and one day...i swear
you will feel my pain too

ok i'm re reading it and it's kinda scary....but i still like it anyone else have thoughts?

Yup...defo an angry poem here... Well done!

A few little things I noticed... that might make it even better...

separate "any" and "pain" there in your seventh line
chose may work better as choose since most of this is written in present tense
and the last line.. I promise<---- if you left that off (since you already 'swear') right before that... it might flow just a wee bit better...

and one day...i swear
you will feel my pain too

Over all...A good write!