i'm gonna be a marine
mean, green, fighting machine
brain washed and designed to kill
i'm going to war, just for the thrill

i'll get a gun, a combat knife
enough to take somebodys life
they'll teach me how to kill a man
to take him down with my bare hands

they point, i shoot
that's how it goes
when you're first to go
and last to know

i'm gonna be a marine
brain washed killing machine
i'll get a gun, a combat knife
enough to take somebodys life

I like this alot, the: "i'll get a gun, a combat knife/ enough to take somebodys life" is really powerful... don't know why but this poem made me smile... god my head is spinning... I love the way your lines just 'fit'... why cant I do that. I admire you.

Thanks alot and thanks for reading.