Your face in my pillow
and your back feels of strength,
my nipples sear a fiery trail
down your well-oiled length.

With my knees between your legs,
I am kneeling and bend,
My tongue flickers as if serpentine,
my fingers silently extend.

For it is me behind you,
my love flows through my hand,
with my body sliding over yours,
I can sense you expand.

The curve of your neck
I will suckle with my lips,
and cause a moan when I pause
between the bones of your hips

turn over and see me,
a fusion so real,
from man to woman
penetration to feel.

It's not just about entering,
not only about thrust,
but sweat and desire,
passion and lust.

Even after we cum,
once or twice, for sure...
I ride slowly in our wetness,
to get you ready for more.

c.2004 sbhenderson

ohhhh
very well written, I like this a lot!!!
~Cyn Lee

Many thx Cyn Lee ... I have been feeling a bit "in your face" recently. Maybe
it's a hangover from the holidays
I've noticed that you also use "descriptives".... it works...

take care, and thanks again, sbhenderson

all I can say is.......wow

To wet_nectar: many thanks. If you are interested, and have liked this... I posted something of similar vein in the Miscellany / short stories board.... (The courtesean) Suzette

eh, suzie this is AQuapoet believe or not i have Alot of talented thoughts. but i really wanna become more diverse and descriptive in my writings.. many tell me i have alot of potential. i just feel as though i can do sooo much more!! PS LOOVE THE Poem AWESOME!!!!!!!!

I'm new to the site and this is the first poem I've read and I loved it! Beautifully written!

I love that poem it WAS written VERY well.

[COLOR=purple] i I really enjoyed poem. It's straight to the point. This poem lets people know that it's not just about sex .... it's about the anticipation that comes along with it.

Wery well written! I LOVE IT! Where can I see more of what you've written?