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burnout_00
slowing down and fading away
tomorrows gone, we're stuck with today
stuck in this hour stuck in this minute
the universe and everything in it


we've stopped expanding
we're being sucked in
about to be swallowed
and spit out again

stuck in time
stuck in space
stuck right here
frozen in place

speeding up and getting brighter
tomorrows here, my head is lighter
seconds become minutes and then turn to hours

This had a last line, but i took it off and turned it into a poem about some fungus i ate... If you read my sh*t you probably know which line....
Hi-top
I think its a really good poem
is the fungus thing true
burnout_00
Yes. I ate some fungi. Not everybody hates you.
Hi-top
where I live almost everyone does
you would be amazed
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