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.........WOW. that is absolutely amazing! your words are unique and naturally unheard of, the hidden meaning is so hidden yet so in the open that it doesn't take a professional poet to understand it. this poem has truly brought tears to my eyes, it reminds me of so much. it makes me think of so much pain but at the same time it makes me think of so many good times... truly touching. keep up your wonderful work!

<is that meant to be more of a song than a poem?>

wow thanks

yes it is more of a song than a poem.. me and my guitar get bored, lol.